still can't add a wikipedia page - what am i missing?

Nine times out of ten it's notability. Wikipedia wants significant coverage of the subject in independent, reliable sources, meaning proper news or books, not press releases, your own site or paid listings. If those sources don't exist yet, no amount of rewriting gets it accepted. Also, if it's your company or you're being paid, you have to declare the conflict of interest and go through Articles for Creation rather than publishing it straight away. Reviewers spot promotional tone very quickly.